Reviews for Giving you a hand
SkaterGurl08 chapter 1 . 2/26/2008
Nice poem. I can actually relate to this in a way.
Mosaic Stains chapter 1 . 8/21/2007
Heartfelt and evocative words. They express in short how you feel and how you're there. I like that you are offering a hand to comfort her and be there as best as you can. Everyone needs that sort of help and comfort every once in a while, and when we least expect it it's best.

I especially like your line:

Come out of the rain, learn to stand again!

I thought was one of the more evocative lines you put.
mizu no kokoro chapter 1 . 8/16/2007
reminds me of the times i discuss my friend's love life.

move on, forget him...

but they hardly listen, do they?

keep writing
Thrice chapter 1 . 7/26/2007
Nicely done. Simple yet heart-felt. You still rock with the wordplay.