Woo! You wrote a song! This is really neat stuff here. A lot of deep lyrics, neatly spaced about into what would probably be a great tune if it could be properly combined with music. There were only like, two typos that I saw, but that's just me being all technical like.

You're a crafty one, now you're basically forcing me to try and write a poem, (Which I have been attempting for the past couple of months.) XD. Kidding, no worries. I'm sure I have one in me, I just have to drag it kicking and screaming out.

Well, it's great to finally see an update on this damn site, for some reason nobody else I read has posted squat. Ah well. Later.

-Stewart

I like it now that you don't have the repeating letters. That was distracting. Now I see it could be a very good song. Keep up the great work.