Um, well- I really liked the poem and all, but to give you the plain and simple truth- that so was not angsty! Maybe you thought it was...how I don't know, but that should make you feel better maybe...cause you didn't like it due to the fact it was angsty, or something! Good job.

Great poem, especially the last few lines. I'm sure a lot of people can relate to it. At least, I know I can. Great job.

wow, sounds like me (hotori).

beautiful. not much else to say. i write bad reviews, i know... but it's beautiful...

I love your name so much! It totally intruiges me. And your work sounds like your name.

I like this. Brava! : )

Nicely done. I think it's good to be inspired by songs to write poetry, it helps you get your mind going. I actually write some of my poems as songs, but then I don't feel like writing the actualy music, so they stay poems. Also, your poem sounded like it's pretty much done, so don't worry about ending it. Good job!

Weezer is great. I'm glad you like them. I truly enjoyed this poem. Very wonderful. You intrigue me.

Ooh. Angsty. I like it.

Very good, darling. Very good. You just hang in there cuz fantasies come true in the perception of an anti-realitied mind.

*claps* Very good! Nice beat, good, depressing theme... one of the best poems here.

i may be young but this is a really good poem, i could tottaly relate to it KEEP UP THE GOO JOB! )