Reviews for renegade or patriot?
Sercus Kaynine chapter 1 . 8/1/2007
I agree with you're opinion, totally, but I seem at a loss for words... Nice job with the rhyming, as well. For some reason, I have a very hard time with that.

Anyway, keep writing!
felicia13 chapter 1 . 7/27/2007
Angry. But it does what it needs to. Not too much, but enough that it's very clear that it lives up to its title.

The second line (and red-haired twin brothers) made me laugh. Not sure if that was intentional. I know where I went with that... especially with the mention of the swamp.

"it’s all black and white in my chromatic mind

neat lines though kaleidoscope thoughts intertwined." This is just great. I just read a poem about kaleidoscopes. I think this one is better.

I just realized this rhymed. Wow. It's so natural I almost didn't notice. Best kind of rhyme, really.

Felicia.
Kindre Turnany chapter 1 . 7/26/2007
I liked this. I can't think of anything else to say.