|Reviews for Pain|
| Kindre Turnany chapter 1 . 7/26/2007
You have a few places where you need to check your grammar, such as "I have too." There should only be 1 "o." I know what you want to say, but I don't feel it. This needs more emotion it it. Try to write your pain so it hurts anyone who reads it, not just so people know you hurt.