Reviews for A Love Poem
Julius Gillian chapter 1 . 1/6/2008
The poem became more and more accusing, I felt like the writer was pointing a finger and narrowing his eyes, as the poem continued. I thought the word 'fucking' was irrelevant with the emotion you had going though.

Don't get me wrong, I'm fine with cussing but some places it just appears to be irrelevant. You might as well use 'fucking' as substitute for all the other angry building blocks you used to get to your climax. Swear words are powerful and can be misused and thus lose all value, be careful with that.

XxXKristie MarieXxX chapter 1 . 9/4/2007
Congrads on ralizing what he is! Great Poem I can totally relate! Great work!

Kristie Marie
The Reverse Edge Blade chapter 1 . 8/1/2007
I liked the plain, simple way you wrote this, without rhyming, just writing your thoughts down.

I can understand why you swear, and I don't blame you for it. This was a great poem, and I have to admit, I don't like swearing, but it made it much easier to understand some of how you feel. Great job with this poem! Keep at it and write more!

The Reverse Edge Blade