|Reviews for Land and Legion|
| HitchSlap chapter 3 . 8/26/2007
I'm enjoying these passages for a lot of reasons. I love how I can hear the narrator's voice in my head; I can see the world coming to life in the descriptions. It's playing out very much like a movie in my head. The sentence structure is simple, but powerful. Great parallelism. I'll be waiting for more, and what I hope will be longer entries (though I understand it's a diary).