|Reviews for Footprints in my Skin|
| inxyourxeyes chapter 1 . 10/25/2007
I really love your use of the extended metaphor of the footprints in your skin. Something most people can relate to, directly and indirectly.
However...I do not liek your use of the word "stuff", it breaks the poetic flow of the story.
| AuraBorealis chapter 1 . 8/4/2007
very good. like always
| phantom66 chapter 1 . 7/27/2007
once again...great work!
| whispered something profound chapter 1 . 7/27/2007
this one's really good too.