Reviews for Bite Me |
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![]() ![]() Awesome! :D You have to update! |
![]() ![]() ![]() love it plz ud soon :D |
![]() ![]() this is very good.. hurry up with the next chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() you have to UPDATE! |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow. i la-la-la-love this fic. it has a lot of spelling errors, but it's okay. you're soo creative. dang, this reminds me of a dode, that i'm sorta with. blah. but, update as soon as possible |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow. i love this fic. i thought it was gonna be just like twilight. but, it's different. please, update. quick, please. i hate waiting for such a long time. haha. |
![]() ![]() Have you ever tried reading your "chapters" before you post them? Maybe you'd notice the typos and the fact that you have no idea what a full-stop is? God, I'm 10 and I don't make mistakes like that! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Still loving this. I am so sorry for taking so long to review! Just know that I haven't forgotten your story :) Hope to read more soon! ~Carm~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting, I love the fact that he can fly. That's so cool! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting...but I'm super curious why he's kidnapping her. |
![]() ![]() ![]() XD frickin awesome update update update! |
![]() ![]() ![]() amazing, cannot wait for the next chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() omg , i love your story, its really good |
![]() ![]() ![]() WOW! what a cliffhanger ending! you better update soon or i'll die of anticipation! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON! |
![]() ![]() ![]() well done. i really like it. you're only 16? nice. you've got alot of writing gumption for somebody your age! there are only two things that i have to complain about: you don't use punctuation at the end of quotations (whaddupwidat?), and you often use "to" when it should be "too". other than that, fab job jeune écrivain. (i do so love online translators! don't you? hahaha) |