Reviews for Ice Cream Truck
FiveToCharm chapter 1 . 8/7/2007
Oh, the beauties of God's simple details!

This made me smile )

Godbless.
abstractelysium chapter 1 . 8/5/2007
I admit I was prepared for disappointment in the opening lines, but you eventually turned this into a vaguely complex little story-poem. Consider not capitalizing the beginning of each new line, as it breaks up the flow. Also, never let go of your images; indeed, expand them. This piece is well worth a little editing. Well done.

abby
Setsuna529 chapter 1 . 8/2/2007
The Lord works in mysterious ways... maybe you can get him to send an icecream truck my way? ;)