Reviews for Salty Kiss
burning in effigy chapter 1 . 8/4/2007
i have a thing for tankas lol :)

and gosh.. one of the better-best ones i've read so far

excellent imagery and metaphor

the ending adds a bit of a darker tone, but i like how it's subtle

fantastic job!
Basara chapter 1 . 7/29/2007
love, bitter, sweet, deceptive...