|Reviews for Salty Kiss|
| burning in effigy chapter 1 . 8/4/2007
i have a thing for tankas lol :)
and gosh.. one of the better-best ones i've read so far
excellent imagery and metaphor
the ending adds a bit of a darker tone, but i like how it's subtle
| Basara chapter 1 . 7/29/2007
love, bitter, sweet, deceptive...