|Reviews for a starving girl's nightmare|
| CiaoMonAmi chapter 1 . 2/20/2008
I especially like the metaphor about the fake fruit and golden plate almost causing her death. It fits in more than perfectly, really.
Although I'm still a little confused as to what it means completely, not because you left out detail, I enjoyed it very much. :)
| AuraBorealis chapter 1 . 8/5/2007
scary. like the ending.
| Exodus.Escence Of Sin chapter 1 . 7/29/2007
Another great constructed poem pal!
I love how it can be so real at times, like visually even though it's in words. awkward i know but completely weird lol. good job once again... 3
Parentheses In Eternity
| Cloudsinthesky chapter 1 . 7/27/2007
very interesting. I like it a lot.
| Silent Freak chapter 1 . 7/27/2007
I know how that girl feels.
I'm in recovery for the same problem right now.
It really does portray the feelings of anorexia.
| phantom66 chapter 1 . 7/27/2007
that was soo sad...but awusome!
keep up the good work!
| the Stranger in the moonlight chapter 1 . 7/27/2007
Very nice job of portraying anorexia. Excellent flow.
~the Stranger in the moonlight
| whispered something profound chapter 1 . 7/27/2007
wow. i love this. *adds to favs*