Reviews for a starving girl's nightmare
CiaoMonAmi chapter 1 . 2/20/2008
I especially like the metaphor about the fake fruit and golden plate almost causing her death. It fits in more than perfectly, really.

Although I'm still a little confused as to what it means completely, not because you left out detail, I enjoyed it very much. :)
AuraBorealis chapter 1 . 8/5/2007
scary. like the ending.
Exodus.Escence Of Sin chapter 1 . 7/29/2007
Another great constructed poem pal!

I love how it can be so real at times, like visually even though it's in words. awkward i know but completely weird lol. good job once again... 3

Parentheses In Eternity
Cloudsinthesky chapter 1 . 7/27/2007
very interesting. I like it a lot.
Silent Freak chapter 1 . 7/27/2007
I know how that girl feels.

I'm in recovery for the same problem right now.

It really does portray the feelings of anorexia.

Good job.
phantom66 chapter 1 . 7/27/2007
that was soo sad...but awusome!

keep up the good work!
the Stranger in the moonlight chapter 1 . 7/27/2007
Very nice job of portraying anorexia. Excellent flow.

~the Stranger in the moonlight
whispered something profound chapter 1 . 7/27/2007
wow. i love this. *adds to favs*