Reviews for The Serpent and the Moon
Abstruse Blue chapter 1 . 7/27/2007
I loved the glimpse of culture and the main characters and just over all, it was a good read. Kudos! I'm going to take a guess and say that The Serpent is Sha-Maed and Da-Ruin is the Moon? maybe. *faving*
Rock on an Ocean Shore chapter 1 . 7/27/2007
Nice story. :D The background about Da-Ruin's priesthood duties was interesting and added depth to the story.

I'm guessing Da-Ruin is the moon? And Sha-Maed is the serpent? The moon seems to represent purity while the serpent tempts others, as a Biblical reference.

Great one-shot. :) I hope you win the contest on Gaia.
delicate-death chapter 1 . 7/27/2007
It really good i think it would be a good book. Keep up the writing.