|Reviews for Night Storm|
| inthenameofwhat chapter 19 . 1/5/2015
This is some emotional sadomasochistic relationship you got here. Aaaaand they made the bastard cole and angel at the last chapter. Yeah cause that makes up for his shitty personality. I can view this couple 20 years from now with the guy verbally abusing the girl and the girl creating a pity party for herself, then the guy gives her a good fuck says baby
Lets forget that I told you that youre a useless whore and whatever other condescending shit I said and be on our merry way. Guess what she replies? Yes!
| Guest chapter 18 . 1/5/2015
Still think cole is a huge douche and temper is a fucking saint. I was right afterall, all his excuses were bullshit. And really she deserved better. I never felt an ounce of sincere remorse nor did I think that he wss sincere in anything he did. He screwed up, messed up big time, almost made her to an anti social girl in need of counselling, then he just shows up years after, still a huge douchebag thinking he can get back with her by being a jerk and well surprise surprise, turns out all she wants is an explanation no matter how shitty and utterly laughable and she comes crawling back to him with her arms and legs open. Poor girl, she seemed more like a masochist to me to accept such pitiful excuses. The guys s douche plain and simple whose ego is wsy far up his ass and from the way he talks to her even when hes apologizing, just convinces me of that even more.
| Tabitha Knighte chapter 19 . 11/1/2014
Loved reading this story! I think you should continue it or make a spin off or something. Great writing.
| bubublacz chapter 19 . 7/31/2014
Happily ever after and all the bullshit :D I will not forget those lines :D Thank you! I had a great time reading this :D
| PoshKimberlee chapter 4 . 3/5/2014
I stopped reading because she gave in to cole easily like FOH he still cocky felt he didn't do
| HeadOverHeelsInHate chapter 19 . 2/19/2013
Awww! Oh my god! That was so cute! I love it! Their principal was awesome, I hope he's invited to their wedding! :P Rory's cool too. Eek! Cole and Temper are just too cute!
| Inday chapter 12 . 3/28/2011
Hello, Tears of My Heart's Mom! :D You're so cool to be reading your own daughter's story. I've been enjoying the story immensely.
P.S. Rory is so sweet...he seems fine with being the third wheel and everything. Wish he could be the "leading man," although it's quite obvious that everything's just gonna end up in tears if Temper chose him because it's obvious that she's in love with Cole.
| EM chapter 5 . 2/25/2011
Shrug. Like in many of these kinds of stories there is literally nothing Cole could do to make for high school. After five chapters I assume they'll wind up together (skips to the end, yep). Which is too bad but you're a solid writer and I did like what I read.
| je-kay24 chapter 19 . 1/2/2011
I really enjoyed reading your story. It had so many ups and downs and there were times when I felt like crying because of all the emotion in your writing. Overall it was a great story. :)
| witeaya chapter 7 . 12/22/2010
this is the second time i read the story and i still have to say that cole is an .
i know he loves her and all that jazz but he's still annoying especially on how he forced himself back into her life.
| SandraStarck chapter 19 . 9/13/2010
Cute story. It was a pleasure reading it. I liked Rory, Temperance and Cole. A Rory/Shay sequel would be cool.
| Sonia and Sarah show chapter 1 . 4/14/2010
l love this story seriously you really did a great job and maybe you could do a story about rory and the girl he studies wit h but in the girls pov. just saying LOL!
| HeartsOfDiamonds chapter 19 . 1/30/2010
I really love this story's ending since it's so sweet and cute. But, i think it's not realistic for somebody to become best friends with somebody who hates them and won't even give them a reason. However, other than that, it's a great story.
| CynicalRomantic09 chapter 19 . 11/19/2009
I stumbled across this about two days ago and I have read this probably three times already. It's definitely one of my favorite stories on here.
I loved Temperance. She's not like a lot of the leading characters out there on this site. I even loved her after she became a bit tamer after high school. However, there was one thing that bothered me and that was how quickly she seemed to forgive Cole and let him back into her life. For someone as "tough" and as independent as she was, it seems odd that she would allow him back after what happened. She said that it ruined her life, yet she offered almost no resistance to his attempts at becoming part of her life again. I don't know-maybe I'm just putting too much of myself into this. I know if I had gone through what she did, I would have fought him tooth and nail.
I think it was a good thing she overheard him with his team-mates, though. If Cole resented her as much as he said he did, then their relationship could have suffered even more than it did with the distance.
One of my favorite parts of the story, though, was her reunion with his family. His family is awesome and I'm glad you included that in there.
Oh, and I also adore Rory! I knew a Rory in college and their personalities seem similar. Found that very odd.
Overall, my only real complaint is that she gave in too easily for my tastes, but this really is a fabulous story despite that. Seriously, thank you for sharing it! I loved reading it and was disappointed when I got to the last chapter because I knew there wouldn't be another one. Lol.
| Jinxed Rogue chapter 14 . 11/8/2009
It was nice for you to recreate the scene in the first chapter that spurred the rift between them. It's good that you're building into why Cole said what he did back then and not just blurting it out, a lot of writers fail to weave their stories out and get anxious to get to the fluff.
I still think Cole is an a$$, but I'm softening.