Reviews for Unforgiven
the truth beneath the rose chapter 1 . 10/6/2007
So powerful, so emotional. It's raw and honest and unfortunately I can relate. I envy you.
Stella Grimshaw chapter 1 . 8/10/2007
Good use of italics, I really wish you wrote longer poems, you have such talent I'd love to see it just create a mural of words across the paper, you'd be able to do it.
Chidori Nadare chapter 1 . 8/2/2007
I feel like somebody is screaming their hearts out. So intense...Well done!

Kissing Concrete chapter 1 . 7/31/2007
WOW. that is honestly all I have to say. well maybe not. haikus are normally not my thing, but this one was literally DRIPPING with emotion and heart break and i love it. *favs*
continuous brevity chapter 1 . 7/30/2007
this was great, i love the italics and bolding you used. nice work.
a silenced revolution chapter 1 . 7/28/2007
Intense... good job.