Reviews for Waltz
Tytherpol chapter 1 . 7/28/2007
i feel this is a great poem

except you're a little wrong about one thing... x)

...you do subscribe to it. which is what makes it all the worse,

but the minute you are born and they place those nine numbers on your birth certificate,

you're labeled and your liberties are automatically defined for you.

jk i know what you were trying to get at; i just couldn't resist saying something about that because man nothing makes me more mad than placing a label on or categorizing a human being.

anyway, i love how all of the religion in this.

it's a nice summary of a lot.

respects, -ty.
concerto49 chapter 1 . 7/28/2007
I liked the first line about the world going to hell. It sure was angst.

There was some strong images.

I didn't know how it suddenly transisted to the man and woman doing the waltz, but it was all cool.

Hmm, yes, was the language necesary? It was one word, and perhaps did it really make a point with it?

It's a little scary too.

Anyhow.