Reviews for good night, moon
Kindre Turnany chapter 1 . 8/17/2007
I loved this, so much I'm favoriting it!

"Before you end for me." Sounds like the accessory is going to die instead of the speaker; i think you should add an "it" in this like in the line before.
DreamlessInfinity chapter 1 . 8/10/2007
This poem has a hauntingly melodic tune to it- the perfect tone for the topic.

burning in effigy chapter 1 . 8/3/2007
creepy and haunting but very well written

it reminds me a little bit of a fairytale gone wrong- but that makes this poem feel so right

(i make no sense)

(sorry for the late review- i was on a bit of a hiatus)

fantastic job
Bonjour Skitty chapter 1 . 8/1/2007
Eerie. It seems to have a lyrical tone as well that makes it just a little bit more haunting.