Reviews for atmosphere
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 10/23/2007
I love the last stanza because it asks some awesome questions... great descriptions and it makes a wonderful point
mizu no kokoro chapter 1 . 7/30/2007
such lovely imagery... Canada truly is one of the best places to live. good job

keep writing
ode to a firefly chapter 1 . 7/30/2007
It seems like that is a battle no matter where you go. My small city has sprawled in all directions with hundreds of new houses going in every year. The mayor just gave permission for a Wal-Mart to go in (bleh), as well as a new school and a new hospital. I couldn't be happier that I'm leaving before all the pretty farmland disappears.

Descriptive poetry is sometimes very difficult to write, but you did very well.

concerto49 chapter 1 . 7/28/2007
It seems you used the atmosphere to address a wide range of issues.

There has always been question about nature and technology. That is a point.

I haven't been to the city, but it has its interesting aspects if it is as you have depicted.

Look forward to seeing ti someday.

Well. Cheers.