Reviews for it was only a kiss
dress her up in fairytales chapter 1 . 1/20/2008
i like this ... but i would have liked it a little bit more had the very last line been, "how did it end up like this?" because it would go with the first line ... kind of wrap things up since everything that isn't the first and last line is in parenthesis.
smile for the sunshine chapter 1 . 12/28/2007
a little morose but good. i love your use of vocabulary words. most people use ones more commonly heard. thanks for the change.

cheers to a well written piece of poetry with lovely descriptions. ) chapter 1 . 8/12/2007
Really great use of words. Sometimes it's really hard to think of all those synonyms. This one's going on my favorites too. (I love dark poetry.)
no.peace.los.angeles chapter 1 . 7/29/2007
I really like all the description you did in this, and all the great verbs you used, but I think the end was maybe a little too simple? I'm not sure. Something about it didn't work exactly for me. And I also think it would be stronger if you took out the "and"s at the beginnings of the lines, just using commas instead. Just my opinion, of course. Keep writing! :)
Anne-of-green-Gables chapter 1 . 7/29/2007
it was a very meaningful poem. it was very deep. it was a very, very good poem.
Artemis Anderson chapter 1 . 7/29/2007
love it
concerto49 chapter 1 . 7/28/2007
It was a little scary. It felt a little fantasy-like too.

I never knew a kiss could be like that.

The ending was a nice twist.

It was rather touching and graphical.

Cool. Cheers.