Reviews for Him
MissLovelyLeigh chapter 1 . 11/13/2010
Very good poem! I'll be thinking of this the next time I'm out in the rain. ;)
CassandraStacy chapter 1 . 8/12/2009
A love affair with rain . . . this is a flippin amazing poem! I simply adore it.

MagicWords chapter 1 . 11/22/2008
That was a beautiful poem.

Loved it!
Zonne chapter 1 . 3/12/2008
You did great! That was great.
chrisertastic chapter 1 . 1/19/2008
haha, rain.

Artemis Anderson chapter 1 . 10/7/2007
My favorite of all your works. Great job on this one!
Avalons Rebirth chapter 1 . 9/1/2007
Wow! That was amazing! I was totally thinking dirty thoughts but that's just me. Great imagery, wonderful flow, terrific personification! I love it!
starlit x sky chapter 1 . 9/1/2007

This was amazing!

Good writing!
The Cheerio chapter 1 . 8/18/2007


Amazing! A very very very good poem.

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its.Nothing.Special chapter 1 . 8/17/2007
Woah. That was a shocker. A GOOD SHOCKER! xD

Interesting piece. I liikeed.

concerto49 chapter 1 . 8/4/2007
It's always good to try new things.

It was rather interesting and surprising.

Perhaps needs stronger imagery.

Anyhow. Cheers.
pop-yur-fcukn-collar chapter 1 . 7/29/2007
I'll be honest with you ...

I have no idea what a personification poem is, so I'm afraid I can't comment on that.

But ... this poem is awesome! I only decided a good 5 minutes ago that I'd indulge in some poetry seeing as I don't read it much. And, I think, this is like the first poem I've read on this site!

It's really good ... you've got talent at this ...
poemkitten7 chapter 1 . 7/29/2007
Wow. Intense imagery. I really like it. Very nicely written. Keep up the great work! ) -Sara