Wow, definitely didn't expect the whole "bloodshot-eyed-Chris passing out drunk on the table" :S interesting though!

O intriguing! Nice chapter, i can almost imagine Sunny's voice throughout it all, and can't wait to see what happens next (esp. with Chris! lol) although the emerging plotline of the abusive father can be headed nowhere good :(

I really like how this story is set up. The whole tone of it puts it in the main character's POV.

Well, I am curious on how the next chapter will go.

...Snow

The structure of these chapters is definitely different. I don't necessarily like the really short chapters. I like more of a medium length but I do like the flashing back and forth. I really like longer chapters though but it seems short is what you're going for. Update soon!

O nice!

I like your style, very interesting, and I can't wait to see what happens next. Love how you jump from present-time richboy to memories of Chris.

I'm off to check out your other stories now, (definitely hooked! :P )

~D.

Hm.

Interesting.

And cute.

It's short though, so I can't wait to see what you pull of your hat for these guys.

xD

I like it.

Already I hate one character and love the other.

Which makes me want to keep reading.

Which I will...now.

Great job.

xD

I like the story, and your writing style is really unique