Reviews for Broken Dolls and Hearts Attack
gakikeko chapter 1 . 9/26/2007
*sniffle* that is so sad! but so cute! but sad!;p
rust phoenix chapter 1 . 7/30/2007
This is such a sad poem, very expressive. It's short and powerful, nice job. I like the title, too.
DemonicTruths chapter 1 . 7/30/2007
Aww, that's so sad. You're better at writing poems than him. lol, j/k. Good poem.

Charite chapter 1 . 7/30/2007
very touching
Kindre Turnany chapter 1 . 7/30/2007
That was so sad. I like that your word choice is more colloquial and less poetic gibberish arranged however you like. It would be even better with a period or comma every now and then though. Poetry uses punctuation the same as prose, just most people don't realize or think of it.