Reviews for Shoulders
AuraBorealis chapter 1 . 8/5/2007
i like how you take simple every day things and strecth them into beutiful peoms.
whispered something profound chapter 1 . 7/31/2007
yay! i heart this. you just need a diff pair of shoulders.
mizu no kokoro chapter 1 . 7/30/2007
i love the emotion in this. very powerful, filled with conviction.

keep writing