Laura i really liked it. No, not like, it's love! Janjanjan haha i make stories too but I'm too shy to publish it. Hope it will get good reviews just like yours. Love you Laura! 3 frm your #1 fan

Nice. I've really got a thing for vampires and this story is totally BAZOOBZ hahaha that means awesome in my language. Keep writing these 'bazoobz' stories girl, I'm your #1 fan. _-b

I was really enjoying it up until the end. Its got nothing to do with whether I liked the direction the ending went or not but more that it felt very rushed. Just too much seemed to happen in so few pages, I didn't really get time to process things and then the reconciliation felt far too abrupt.

I actually really enjoyed the story despite what my comment above might imply. Laughed out loud quite a few times and got really drawn into the characters.

Thanks for sharing :D

Loved the story! All though, I thought the end was very abrupt! Good Job, Enjoyed it!

Your dialogue is so natural! I love it!

Sounds interesting so far. I usually don't read vampire stories but this sounds different than Twilight. I like Lucian's character.

I love how this isn't a pure happy or pure tragic ending. It's bittersweet, with an emphasis on the sweet part. I really enjoyed reading it.

Oh wow. Has he been in a coma for years?

Wait... is Rachael a vampire too?

I really like this story. It's not the typical Twilight-esque vampire romance, and the mute thing is a fun twist.

Congradulations on getting it published. Good luck but you won't need it.

Okay, I really, really liked this book. I'm so glad I found it! I liked reading Lucian's point of view, and I was shocked when I found out Lisa had betrayed him. Then, of course, I was relieved to see them work it out.

I found you through your comic on Smackjeeves. I didn't realize until going to your website that your storytelling abilities go far beyond one medium. Again, great story!

Great story! I loved, even when I found out that Lisa was with the bad guys.

The only thing I didnt like was Lucian forgiving her. I was really pissed of with her for choosing her friend and not him.

Anyway, I loved your work.

Cool story. I'm wondering if the Red Generation was some kind of vampire assassin experiment gone wrong or something...Or maybe Lucian was the one who killed his parents and can't remember... There's so many places this story can go. Can't wait to read the rest. Pretty neat website by the way. I liked the graphic novel on there, but you left me hanging.

Uh... Well that was unexpected...