Reviews for Better Man
FELICIA-SPENCER chapter 1 . 12/17/2007
I like this one because of it's honesty. This is brilliant. the line where you said

Would he forgive you for what you did?

Would he let it go as good as I did?

No I am not the best

But I am willing to take a bid

That was flawless. Perfect. This is poetry in motion. You're really stepping up your game here.
Kriss-C chapter 1 . 7/31/2007
That was a really good poem! You have been through alot with me but thats because we were together for so long! Thats why you know all that you do about me! Great poem!