Reviews for When I Died for the First Time
person is gone chapter 1 . 2/25/2008
I like the poem style-wise and structured and all... just the meaning behind it seemed strange. In the beginning you say, "Its not even so much I was hurt.", then in the end... "And that... Was when I died for the first time." - indicates a lot more pain. The two lines, for me, seemed contradictory.

Anyway, apart from that I thought it was fine

Moon's Poetess
Leaving Here chapter 1 . 10/21/2007
ohh i liked it.

i didnt really get much emotion from it

till the last stanza. it was all building up...


keep writing,