Realistically, the firemen wouldn't have let him back in, but what the hay. [What caused such a fast-spreading fire anyway? O.o]

I rather liked it, tragic though it was. Your writing is very polished, grammar and all, which is a rare occurence from what I have come to see. The only thing I would say is italicize/underline the book titles and maybe italicize Em's thoughts, but that's all.

Sad but good. Richard truly had a noble heart. Well written.

Keep up the good work.

God Bless you.

~LittleDoe

You're rigth, it is sad. But at the smae time it teaches a lesson. Good story :) ~light

Wow! Don't apologize for it being too dark and depressing. It was really moving. Wow, I wonder if I would be brave enough to do something heroic like that? Well done, Frodo dear!

God bless,

Ellie

Wow! That was good and sad. Richard really was a hero. Em will probably never forget that he got himself killed for someone else. Great job!

Kit

I liked the story, but not the words that told it. Does that make any sense?