Reviews for I Can't Say Yes
a silenced revolution chapter 1 . 8/6/2007
Wow. Just... wow... (because I don't know what to say)
Ashelin chapter 1 . 7/31/2007
Wow. This seriously gave me chills, I'm not kidding. All the emotions, it just weighs me down. It was beautifully written, probably one of your best, but it's just so horribly heavy. I don't even know what to say. It's hard feeling like you disappoint someone, like you can't be who they want [need] you to be. You did a wonderful job.
EyesEmphatic chapter 1 . 7/31/2007
This is so open, and so emotional..wow.

You've done a great job on this. I hope whomever this is meant for reads it, if that's what you want of course.

(And I know what it's like to come across writing/poetry that you know all about, and wish you didn't.)
the prophet apathetic chapter 1 . 7/31/2007
i don't mean this to sound creepy...

you're not alone. right now. i read this and felt so much like i was with you it was frightening. and so for that, i feel like you have succeeded with this poem.

and i want you to know, that for once, at least, you were not alone with your thoughts, because i was there as well.

...good job...
Kindre Turnany chapter 1 . 7/31/2007
I really liked this, except for the end. I wish I could say why... it felt... anticlimactic? Something close to it anyway.