|Reviews for Unwanted Adventure|
| randym chapter 7 . 12/4/2015
Are you ever going to update this? I really, really, enjoy the writing style, and you haven't exactly given us closure. And (Honestly, but with no offense meant) the sequel is terribly written, as far as...well, in comparison. It isn't nearly as enjoyable, especially since it seems completely in-congruent with what has happened so far in this story. An angel? Unusual, to say the least, but I had to stop at the phrasing the 'guardian angel' used. Your writing has improved wonderfully; and it's quite amusing to find a sequel which has been written in a style previous to the original. That said...please update this. You're one of my favorite writers, and the character interactions, as well as overall setting, is fascinating and pleasant.
| Anne chapter 7 . 5/26/2013
To be honest, when I first checked out this website, I was having doubts if I would read anything from here (since I've always been reading stories from Wattpad and got used to it), but I just happened to come across your awesome story and immediately got hooked! Actually, I am just a silent reader but when the story is really good, I would love to comment on it! I'll even make an account here to follow your story. You're story is very nice, please do continue writing it! :D
| Nydra chapter 7 . 3/30/2013
Are you not writing this anymore? It's amazing!
| Mizuno-Suzuka chapter 7 . 8/16/2012
Epic! 3 God I missed this story. lol
| Shezu Rivera chapter 7 . 8/12/2012
Post more as soon as you can! This story is AMAZING! I LOVE IT SO MUCH! It should be a novel, that way I can read it wherever and whenever! (not having to worry about 3g, wifi, data and what have you) I'd probably buy a few copies of this just for myself! And I'd recommend it to everyone! (and I have a lot of family members who love to read) There are a few spelling/grammar mistakes, but for the length of this story, and each chapter, I'm not surprised. And since I don't see anything about a beta reader, I AM surprised there are so few! The work and effort you put into this story, with the characters, the plot twists, the pacing and the writing itself is amazing and it just sucks me in. I'm interested to know what happens next, and can't wait to dive into the realm of this story again! I want to know what happened to Emma's parents, how she's going to get back, who she'll meet, how her adventure will go, and what her relationship with the mouse prince will turn into! This story is a work of art, a master piece. I do not wish to rush you on your next chapter, but just know I will be patiently waiting at the edge of my seat for the next part in Emma's story.
| MissKukyMonster chapter 7 . 5/22/2012
Wow this story is really good! I really enjoy it and can't wait until it gets even further into the story line!
| There's-A-Star-In-My-Hand chapter 7 . 8/4/2011
gosh you dont know how much i missed this story! ! ! !
lmao i know why i loved Enick/Syris now! ! ! ! he is just so arorable ;D
anywaay i though she called the horse Syris not COW! ! ! !
i love this story sooooo much!
update soon love yo x
| There's-A-Star-In-My-Hand chapter 2 . 6/25/2011
Lmaoo i remember when i read this story a few months ago...maybe a year and i fell in love with it! and i just read the first chapter again and i'm proberly even more in love :D
i can see there are only 7 chapters are you editing it?
if so PLEASE HURRY UP! LOL jk no need to rush! ;)
i can wait years cuz honestly this story is the sbsolute best ever!
PS: I LOVE ENICK! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
I WANNA HAVE HIS BABIES!
| There's-A-Star-In-My-Hand chapter 1 . 2/23/2011
i absolutley love this story!
is she gonna get with Enick? i hope so!
please carryy on writing!
i really loveyour stylee :)
| totellalie chapter 46 . 3/1/2010
First i jsut wanna say that this story was GREAT!
Second I can't believe Emma left, Poor roido :(
& i can't believe Enick said all those things to her before she left,that was pretty sad.
I hope you finish the sequel to this i can't wait to read it :D
| xNadiiLiciious chapter 47 . 2/10/2010
You know, I just read ur story in 2 days. It was that addictive.
Awesome story! Now I'm going to check if u have a sequel!
| ChristianAngel01 chapter 46 . 4/22/2009
whoa that was an awesome story I loved it no matter how bad the cliff-hanger was I cant wait to read more of your amazing stories :D
| Marialousia chapter 46 . 3/2/2009
WHY DID SHE LEAVE?
My heart breaks for him...
Well...at least she took the ring, as a way to remember him.
Roido is soo cute, I swear.
I LOVE YOUR STORY!
| raped by a female bunni chapter 46 . 2/16/2009
how could she leave roido behind?
awesome story though
| dreamer999 chapter 3 . 11/17/2008
Well...that was scary O_O
Makes me wonder how old enick is and emma...
I imagine emma around 13 so is roido and that enick as 20 something or older...this chap is really scary.
Seems like every chapter you make is gonna be one thing and different in a good way of course! ;D