|Reviews for nobody cares|
| Fan Fan chapter 1 . 11/17/2007
You'll be number two in the world
You won't be who I admire
I won't hold on to you
Cause without doubt,
I know you'd let me fall.
But in the end,
Yes, without my dedicated breath,
I know you are truly alive.
P. written and dedicated for this review :)
| Twilight Starr chapter 1 . 11/8/2007
| ebony-ink chapter 1 . 8/19/2007
This is really good, do you have a tune or a riff or something for it?
The chorus or verse 1 was my favourite bit.
| Kindre Turnany chapter 1 . 8/17/2007
I liked this.
But do you mind if I ask why you used the number 4 instead of just spelling it out? It bothered me... And you might as well just copy paste the pre-chorus and chorus when you use them later on, scrolling up to find them is annoying and interrupts the flow of reading the song.
| XxXKristie MarieXxX chapter 1 . 8/7/2007
Ithink I would like it more as a poem. But I love the messege your are portraying here. Keep it up!
| Exodus.Escence Of Sin chapter 1 . 7/31/2007
To be truely honest, I didnt think it rhymed at all and i dont like that with songs but i also at the same time adore the lyrics and the idea and vision of the song. good job.
Parentheses In Eternity