Reviews for Salmonberries
a silenced revolution chapter 1 . 8/8/2007
A sad story, but beautifully put as usual.
Ashelin chapter 1 . 8/1/2007
This is haunting. And the similarities and differences in both of your guy's poems is chilling almost. I read her salmonberries poem too, that's what I'm talking about. hard. I see how it's even worse. What she thinks, what you think, the twists of reality. This was a wonderful poem, though it left me feeling less than what I was before.
blister chapter 1 . 7/31/2007
I like this (in a depressing sort of way.) Especially the "I don't eat salmonberries anymore."