Reviews for Sea Salt Lips
a silenced revolution chapter 1 . 8/8/2007
The words and formatting at the end really conclude the piece nicely. Great work.
Daiysis chapter 1 . 8/2/2007
This is so sad. I don't like it when things like that happened between close friends -sigh- To be honest, I had a very similiar situation to this one, but I was the girl. I noticed the change between my partner and their friend and it hurt me that I had something to do with it... I wished that life couldn't be that way...
Setsuna529 chapter 1 . 8/2/2007
The ending is really sad, but it does a wonderful job of tying back in with the rest of the poem. Fantastic images in the first part.
Unknowning chapter 1 . 8/1/2007
This is a sad poem. I can feel the narrator's pain. Good job.
thursdays and rain chapter 1 . 7/31/2007
loved the way you wrote this. reminds me of my summer ;)