Great story, I loved everything, especially Brooke, since she seems so mature and nice. Not that I'm sorry for the break up.
The story also learns not to hang on in bad or not loving relationships, I am an adult and a whole lot of people just hang in, because they're affraid to be alone.
Thanks for the story!

I highly dislike Delilah, because she should be little more understanding with Sam if she esnted to be the "bigger" person in the argument. And why she got all upset when her friend slept with Jack? Yes, Ellie's het friends but Delilah should mind her own business. And she get swooned by jacks body and kisses like a typical horny teenage girl.

I liked the story!

Aw the way jacky laughed and said he couldnt stay mad was so cute!

Spent whole day reading! it was great, so real, and touching! I have to say I fell for Jack, but I also had a soft spot for Sammy! Great writing! lots of love!

My god Lila is sooo annoying! She's such a bitch! PINK ONE OR THE OTHER! Don't be making kissy faces at both then break down screaming, " Oh my gosh, I'm such a slut! Whatever will I doooo!?"

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Such an awesome first chapter! Love the story so far!

Not so sure I like Ellie. Best friend's are supposed to help steer you in the right direction, not instigate your problems. She keeps encouraging Delilah to overlook and do things that we all know will leave her feeling like shit. The reason we have more casual friends than best friends is because not everybody cares enough to stop reckless decisions. If Ellie is Delilah's only friend, then it's understandable why she would have trouble sticking with her gut and resisting her carnal desires. It's hard to see what's truly important when someone whom you trust keeps going "OMG! That's SO great and not scummy AT ALL! Don't feel bad!"

I like this story but I think you need another chapter to tell whether or not that they stay together long. Great story. :)

Why I thought there was a sequel I'll never now lol but there should be one I don't want to use my imagination lol

loved it was written really well but I felt the ending was rushed but theres a sequel who cares :) and y can't Jack be real haha

Hi! Awesome story! But yes please! I'd love to see an epilogue! Plssssss pretty pls! Thanks for the story.. Gotta love bad boys getting tamed!

Hello again )
This story was awesome. Preferred this one more than Chaysing Elliot, although I have to say that the ending was a little too rushed. Chaysing Elliot had a beautiful ending.
I was on Team Jack from reading the summary itself! Lol. I think I have a liking for wrong relationships. Oops.
Your style of writing reminds me so much of myself when I was younger. I had a thing for an impossible number of plot twists too. Mine had alot more graphic sex scenes though. Haha.
On another note, I think we're the same age! Twenty! I hope you're still writing ) you're a good writer with amazing plots. But if you don't mind me saying, you should proofread your stuff before publishing it. It makes it easier for us readers )
Looking forward to reading more of your work.

in regards to the HIV results - Sam was covered in Caitlin's blood after he found her so it would actually be rather likely that he would be positive (especially considering their history together) which i know doesn't really work with your story line but thought i'd point that out.