Even unfinished, this is one of the best stories on fictionpress. I really hope this comes back, because the charas are terrific.

dude, i love this! it is hilarious! you have to update as soon as possible :)!

I really like this story, from the quirky sense of humor and narration style to the fun charaters, especially the characters. Naku and Koro have a very interesting dynamic, as well as the others. I found it a while back and have been checking back on it weekly since some time back in 07. Please keep up the good work.

the good part of the story gets too confusing! is the first time naku asked koro in the story? or did that happen before? and why do they keep calling her eorin? what questions? bah this story must quickly fall into place!

how come your chapters keep getting better and better? ANSR NOW my chapters dont get better, they get UNFARE:poutyface:

anyways ::coughcough:: good job keep it up!

U did! U split them up! no the world is coming to an end... that and you laft us with a semi-clifhanger, please up date soon... please? ::puppyeyes::0.0

Capietano el Rueben! cool chapter, but u better not split Koro and Naku up:: evilglare::

ah, the story is slowly coming together...i love it!

I absolutely LOVE this story! It's HILARIOUS! I was laughing so hard TOO MANY TIMES TO COUNT that I got the hiccups! This story is awsome and I can't WAIT to read the next chapter! Keep up with the GREAT work!

By the way, one small question. Why did Koro try to kill Naku that first chapter and seem like he absolutely hated her? I still don't get that.

ah keep updating!

yea koro! that was so friken funny! i luv's it! take a cake for a beautiful chapter:)

Wow, this is awesome. Seriously. Good work!

well, it reminds me of being in eighth grade, but the story is intriguing that i can't stop reading it! hurry and update!

shiny forks! yea this is better than the last one! have a whole CAKE!

beau-t-ful i liked the part about loveing coffe my best friend hates coffe and she stares at me when i drink it, any ways have a cookie and a brownie for a job well done!