Well I'm glad you did the epilouge because it certainly helped clear things up. good story!

Kattie

I love it! It really could not be a better way for Alicia and Tyler...i m still really miffed that its ended but still still has made me a whole lot happier than the last chapter did. So thank you! And yes i will definitely be looking out for more of your stories in the future.

i have nt minded bearing with you at all and i absolutely loved reading your story...im really quite upset that its ending though...it was an absolutely reat story and i find it really sad that tyler and alicia did nt end up together. I know that would have been a bit cliche but still...well i hope the epilogue wont be as sad...good story, though again im gonna miss tyler and the rest. I ve just started uni now as well, its quite fun so far in general.

wow... that was certainly an ending i wasn't expecting. it was good all the same though since it was different from what I thought would happen.

great story and I'm sad to see it go even though i just stumbled upon it a couple of days ago.

Kattie

I must say that it seemed you kinda just threw in Alicia is sleeping with Troy. I don't know if I missed something, but I don't remember hearing anything about that except for when she told the others over the IM thingy. Anyway, I love the story so far and I can't wait for an update!

Kattie

Wait im confused...when did Alicia and dart sleep together? And great chapter...update and son!

omj

so i totaly though i knew how it was guna be but then

BOOM!

completly different and i must say i greatly apriciate the break from cliche drama

one thing tho, in one of the chapters you say "Tyler was stood" idk much about grammar sadly but it just sounds awkward...

so ya, keep writing! hurry! to much suspense XP

muchluv

Even though it's been a bit since I've read this story (which I'm so terribly sorry for), I immediately got right into the story line, the characters, everything. I love this :) Keep up the great work!

~Carm~

yes it has been a while lol but i understand you had uni and stuff...i did get confused a bit trying to remember who amaris and rachel were...but its all good...and great chapter though i can t wait to see more of Alicia with tyler...if thats going to happen...well update soon as you can! cheers

I love everything about this story! You're doing a phenomenal job, and I really can't wait for more :)

~Carm~

Haha i loved this...things made alot more sense and im happy with how it s all going..hopefully alicia can sort out her stuff with Mary and Gerard..i love what Dart did...still dunno if he s genuinely helping or not(as u might notice im a bit slow at working out these things lol)but its good that Alicia has him to use hehe..abt the cruel intentions reference, i also wanted to say that Alicia reminds me a tiny bit of Kathryn, a less cruel version though. But thats a good thing, honestly. She was my fave character in the movie, thus Alicia is one of my fave characters i ve read. I have a place at Uni of Edinburgh, goin to study Eng lit and History. Cheers!

O. It would seem Im back in high school all over again. I like your writing style, and the first person. I would almost think that alicia and shaine would bond now, both being shipped off to boarding school by parents, and being used by tyler. Hmm, we'll see I suppose. Im excited to see whether Dart's plan works, and if Tyler will ever get over his emo self and live life.

Keep writing, and update soon!

-Jyska

I loved this chapter as well, great to see that things are finally looking up a bit for alicia except for the tyler bit. The new principal s daughter, that and the fact she s blond and bubbly sort of reminds me of Anette from the movie Cruel Intentions..oh well as long as Alicia is nothing like her and retains her great personality it does nt matter! Update soon as you can! Cheers

lol i could nt even remember if i d reviewed this chapter yet or not...cause i read it ages ago..great great work..i notice some change in pace of the story but it works..i liked how tyler was in this chapter, however, he really confuses me sometimes! Lol..i asked abt uni cause i might be going to a uk uni myself this sep..well cheers!

Ah! This is such a wonderful story. I love the entire idea of it, plus you've got amazing characters and a refreshing way of narrating. As usual, keep up the great work :)

~Carm~