I have to say, this is quite well-written. That being said, I already hate the ER doctors, the psychiatrists and the very idea of restraints and a Quiet Room and antipsychotic medication. It's just wrong. I feel angered at the injustices being forced on the girls and am enraged by the ER doctor's comment that 'this is more than the usual cry-for-help cuts'. Stupid bastard.

This is a great story so far! I've never been to a mental hospital, but the details you give make it seem real. Great writing!

I'm intrigued.

The writing this is AMAZING. I was in a psychiatric hospital once and this guy freaked out and tried running, so they put him in restraints. It was kind of sad because at the time he was my "friend". I know you're not really expected to get close to people in inpatient, but when they're the only people you have around your age to talk to...You know how it is... Anyhow.. I'm adding this to my alert list and hopefully you'll update _

Very well written, and really interesting. Keep writing!