Reviews for To Be Peter Pan
concerto49 chapter 1 . 8/20/2007
It was interesting portrayal of poems and poets, but why the title?

Perhaps this is a touch of parody?

Our creative minds sure are interesting.

Anyhow. Cheers.
no.peace.los.angeles chapter 1 . 8/12/2007
Interesting piece. I love all the different similes and metaphors you've used in this - they're so vibrant and vivid, and I can see the poem unraveling, as it were. And I'm always a sucker for poems about writing. :D Beautiful work. Keep writing! :)
felicia13 chapter 1 . 8/2/2007
Indeed. Here's to classics that still rock!

I sometimes find myself wishing that emotions were words instead of feelings. It'd make everything so much easier, wouldn't it? The feeling I get off this is much the same as the one you get off every poem. Usually, there's just things over top of it and you don't see it.

Poetry as a marionette... I like it. Sad but true, I think. Can you make it dance?

Setsuna529 chapter 1 . 8/2/2007
Awesome metaphor, poems as puppets - it works amazingly well. Great writing.

(and by the way, I love Peter Pan.)