|Reviews for A Commonplace, Cliché Ridden, Comedic Carrying On|
| centenarian chapter 6 . 5/27/2008
Okay, that was really funny. I was laughing the whole way thru. But yeah, especially when she's trying so hard to be "porn star-ish" but anyways, it's well written enough. Good job. Hope you update soon.
| Karibou chapter 6 . 5/27/2008
This is FANTASTIC! I love the quirky first-person narrative you've got going... Really puts us in the story. And, what a story it is! We've undoubtedly all heard this tale in some form or another, but it still feels fresh and engaging. It's funny, sweet, and heartbreaking all at once. We all know what's coming... but poor Sab... she's totally clueless. Please keep this up. I'm sorry to say I fell behind in reading it - getting this update reminder in my email in-box was a nice surprise. Please keep it up!
| Weirderest chapter 6 . 5/27/2008
He slid into a seat across from me, and studied me briefly as if wondering what planet I had come from. Honestly. What was it with people today?
I was busy pretending to make paper cranes out of napkins whenever I thought Irish wasn’t watching, although I kind of realized that he pretty much always was.
(Ooh. Paper cranes are super hard. I spent the whole year doing that in Calculus.)
Irish was helping him and looking right at me though. I gave him a quick smile so I wouldn’t look like a total loser, and turned to open the front door.
What a silly girl! I mean, he's being rather obvious. Pretty update, can't wait for more.
Rachel Summers stood there, in all her glory, Barry Jamison like a purse across her arm, and a whole load of people behind her. She smiled at me, but in a not-nice way. “Move, Aaron’s Girlfriend. I brought the party.”
I kind of like Rachel Summers. She's quite the biatch.
| Weirderest chapter 5 . 5/9/2008
Yo. (Sorry about that.)
“Well, yeah. What else could be causing it? Short of pregnancy, I mean,” I added. “Ian’s not pregnant, I’m guessing?” I added.
Haha this totally reminded me of Juno which is the smartest movie someone could have created. I think its cuase i just finished watching it and everytime the word pregnant comes up i immediately think: "Thunderbirds are a go!" (Bizarre-O)
'Like I said. Sparkling conversation.'
I love Sabrina. Mad love.
And the whole porn star usage is totally brilliant. You are so my idol.
Ah, Irish. “Oh. Hey, Irish.”
Psst. I totally love this. Irish boys are totally cute. Oh my days, i have this image of a redhead with bright green eyes holding a pot of gold. Pretty.
I can not believe how Sabrina tunes Justin out like that. She is D.E.N.S.E.
| Renee LH Gowri chapter 5 . 5/3/2008
In the words of great Mole from Disney's "Atlantis"...
"I'm so excited~!"
Ha ha ha! But seriously. This is excellent! It amuses me to no end! (And yes, I speak like that.)
And I have no idea what you're talking about when you say, "I’m almost a little embarrassed by it; it’s not particularly well-written, nor does it have great characterization or anything..."
What. The. Freak. I admit that you're using common, overused cliches, but that doesn't mean it's not well-written. If you mean this isn't the best you can do, then I'm just plain shocked 'cuz this is excellent. And even the cliches you DO use. Everyone's heard of it sure, but you're adding new life into it with this silly Sabrina who has a short attention-span and other mental aspects. You could push a little more originality into the cliches (mostly because people have abused the topics so much), like trying not to make the ending or what's coming up seem so obvious.
But still. Good-no-GREAT job! I especially love the whole porn star part in Chapter 4 and 5, and the part where Ian could be pregnant. Oh! And I fell in love the phone conversation with the Irish lad. I just feel like some silly misadventures are going to so pop up! X3
Keep at it. :)
| Counting Petals chapter 5 . 4/27/2008
Haha, I wonder how she's going to talk her way out of this one? ;)
| malloluvsya chapter 5 . 4/22/2008
So glad you updated. I love Sabrina, she's a trip. I just hope she doesn't get hurt, she's too awesome to be messed with.
| Stahlut chapter 5 . 4/20/2008
This chapter was really good. I like how the story is developing. Cant wait to read more.
| Bloody Crayon chapter 4 . 4/7/2008
Man, this is really good. I love how dense Sab is. It's kind of amusing. Aaron is totally using her, though, to get back at Rachel. I kind of feel bad for Sab, since she's so in love with him. Please update soon.
| Weirderest chapter 4 . 4/1/2008
Oh my God. I AM SUCH A SABRINA! :(
And i've just realized how stupid i've been! This sucks completely.
Thanks for the wake-up call.
I guess sometimes, living in my own world is much better than real life. I need someone to smack me.
And someone needs to smack Sabrina too.
But i love her.
HILARIOUS story, you had me giggling all through. Update soon.
| sketchingaCYNiC chapter 4 . 3/29/2008
lol, nice twist. awesome that she's gotten her goal done. very fast. but i know aaron's a dumb boy XD i hope she'll dump him and realize that dwyer's adorable :D
| sketchingaCYNiC chapter 3 . 3/29/2008
haha this is way more lighthearted than "all the things we could do." so funny how sabbie's so ditzy. i like her. :D
| sketchingaCYNiC chapter 2 . 3/29/2008
haha. i like sabrina cuz she's like a total stalker, and everyone else knows it. XD
| Counting Petals chapter 4 . 3/28/2008
But silly things are so much fun to write, and even more fun to read. Especially if you spend most of your time reading history textbooks. ;)
| rainbow. hues chapter 4 . 3/26/2008
LOL. sab's hilarious. so caught up in her own world