Reviews for A Commonplace, Cliché Ridden, Comedic Carrying On
Stahlut chapter 4 . 3/17/2008
I loved this story, it was kind of cute, even if I did cringe at some of the things that she did. But thats because it is so opposite of anything I would do, but she is funny. And well I hope you update soon.
malloluvsya chapter 4 . 3/17/2008
Aww, sab got a date with her loverboy. Only, I can't stop thinking that maybe it's just a plan to Aaron. I don't want to think like that, but you never know. But still, little Sab makes me happy.
StarryKnight46 chapter 1 . 3/17/2008
Ahahaha! This made me laugh so hard! Keep writing, please XD

Renee LH Gowri chapter 3 . 1/1/2008
(Is laughing herself silly.)

It's a bit of a cliche plot with matching characters, but I really couldn't care less. It's hilarious! And even though Sab isn't really, I would totally let her know that she's not the only one with that kind of thought process around here. (Wink, wink. Nudge, nudge.)

The great part is, you just keep making the story funnier, chapter from chapter. A slow beginning evolved into the wonderful butterfly that third chapter? Just go with me here.

By the way, in the first chapter, be careful with your paraentheses and the hyphens (ex., the-person-who-is-reviewing), because you don't need them so often. It seems excessive otherwise.

But yeah. Keep up the great work! I'm looking forward to the ensuing hilarity!
FamousOneLiners chapter 3 . 12/11/2007
i lovelovelove this :)
aicha chapter 3 . 10/9/2007
This is so different from All The Things We Could Do but I really like it. Sabrina is hilarious. I absolutely loved that conversation about Sabrina being pretty and Heather being porn star hot. It was a totally realistic conversation and it really showed that they were close friends. I loved it. This story is really funny and I hope it doesn't become a teen angst story but I still do love All The Things We Could Do.

Please update...both stories!
goodbyemylover chapter 3 . 9/8/2007
this was so funny. and i think i have a thing for justin swyer, lol.

update soon, please!
Ms.Romantic chapter 1 . 8/31/2007
Karibou chapter 3 . 8/26/2007
I'm really enjoying the quirky humor in this piece! Can't wait to see what happens. Great job - fantastic dialog, nice flow of ideas, awesome characters! Keep it up!
Counting Petals chapter 3 . 8/25/2007
“If it breathes, moves, and has sex, it’s alive, don’t you think?” Agreed. I really see no point in taking Bio 101, do you?

A short skirt doesn't seem all that impractical in October...but maybe that's just because I'm in Seattle and as long as it's not raining, anything's fair game.

Who in their right mind would give up Patrick Dempsey? There's no way I'm seeing that movie now.

I love how you always have such interesting, quirky narrators. It makes it so much more fun to read.
Luv-TU chapter 3 . 8/25/2007
I love this story!
Sally Can Wait chapter 3 . 8/25/2007
Oh my gawsh, I love you for being intelligent. I cannot tell you HOW MUCH I appreiciate it. I keep trying to find something good to read, AND I CAN'T. I mean, besides actual books, which I have a lot of. But I need something FRESH. Or something. Like this.

You and your amazing characterization.

The things Aaron said about everything actually sounded like what a kid would say! Not something so incredibly dumb that nobody would ever be like that. Update this soon! And ATTWCD!


P.S. If Ian is gay, I will kill you. Don't even ask. xD
Meghan chapter 3 . 8/25/2007
Aw, I love this
Rizu Herd chapter 3 . 8/25/2007
Hey, this is story is great and I love Love LOVE it! Yes I know I'm weird - oops! Sab sort of reminds me of me in the weird way ... not the whole stalker thing ... that's so over rated! Yeah anyway ... update asap!
Chelseamuffin chapter 3 . 8/25/2007
Sabrina is pure love and win and joy and happy and everything all rolled into one. (And yes, you can expect me to start just about every review with this, because that's just the way I roll.) She seems realistic, which is major yay.

I also still love her interaction with her friends, because it's... real? (Oh, God. Too late to try and think of good review. Want sleep.) I don't know- it doesn't seem *forced*, like a lot of the relationships on FPC. (That I've seen, anyway.) It's... natural. And major points for the reccurring porn star thing. It's just golden all around.

So yes. Much love for this. As I've said, I want sleep. So I will get some now.
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