Reviews for Trivial Matters of War
lebuffle chapter 1 . 8/2/2007
I don't believe this hasn't got any reviews!

I like "but all my towels are still damp" beacause it works both literally and metaphorically. I also like the way the hyphens make a break between the literal sense and the extended metaphor, with the combination at the end.

It's really neatly done. Good job!

"If you want a job doing, do it yourself".