Reviews for the calm after the storm
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 10/24/2007
the imagery is beautiful and I love the last three stanzas... very sad and beautiful
Charity F chapter 1 . 8/19/2007
Your answers to those questions are wonderful.

It hurts, but still wonderful.
Kenk3n chapter 1 . 8/10/2007
quite good hehe, didn't know what ebb meant till now ;

keep it going! i wanna read more!
recycle rhymes chapter 1 . 8/5/2007
love the imagery. just love this poem it's so pretty. the images connect together so perfectly. nice work.
Stella Grimshaw chapter 1 . 8/4/2007
and those waves,

those tides that ebb and reside

(emotions...)

Incredible. I loved so much how you compared emotion to a tide. Completely beautiful. Wonderfully done.
The Postscript chapter 1 . 8/3/2007
M. Couldn't agree more with the first reviewer - "Heart wrenching, heart aching ..." I especially love the lines "'why do you bleed?' (internally)/'why must those tears fall?' (invisible)". Great alliteration and word choice - it works nicely with the flow of the poem. I feel like this poem is a kaleidoscope, as no matter which way you turn it you will still see a diversity of colours. But it is also symmetrical and organized so as the message is not lost.

You have a very informal style, but you don't let that affect the quality of the poem. Few can pull that off. Awesome work, again. Keep writing, k.
Katie Kat chapter 1 . 8/2/2007
Heart wrenching...

Heart aching...

and exacly how I feel right now.

Thank you.