Reviews for Daisies
DemonicTruths chapter 1 . 8/14/2007
Aw, that's so sad! It's a really good songish poem. I like the meaning to it and how everything is written. Good job.
Beautiful Bones chapter 1 . 8/3/2007
Okay that was a little weird towards the end there XD.

It was just too short to be a song. It really had, no rhyming. I didn't really catch a course in there either. I like the idea of it though. The whole 'Broken Dreams' deal with the 'Daisies'. If you'd really work on it, I think you could turn it into something nice.

I'm sorry but I'd have to give it a 1 of 5. Don't worry! Just keep working at it! I'm always here for helpful critism to better your writing!

~Happy Writings!