|Reviews for The White City|
| tarynham chapter 20 . 6/14/2014
Please update this. It is so good, even if your fed up with this story now please give me a Happy Ever After. Marek and Daniil need to get together. Make it happen ... Grr. Lol. I really do love this story it's really well done. Please update soon
| Guest chapter 20 . 12/20/2012
Well, is Daniil going to go back and court his lover properly or is he going to be the bastard that Marek assumes he is, and truly abandon him?
| sapere chapter 20 . 11/30/2012
I hope you get back to this one day. It's a lovely story. I admit, I prefer the Duke for Marek... I hope they sleep together even if Marek gets with the other Prine. But the other prince shouldn't have left like that.
| moon01234 chapter 20 . 4/6/2011
Really great story. Can't wait to read more of it.
| meep chapter 20 . 3/9/2011
Is this going to update again?
So close to the end :(
| KaiMeiHime chapter 20 . 2/20/2011
I absolutely love this story and am psyched for the next installment. Please update son :D?
| xXx.Fallen.Angel.xXx chapter 20 . 3/19/2010
I've been waiting fo rthe next cjapter of this for AGES and I'm so glad that its finally out!
had to re-read everything though because... well I couldnt remember every lil detail.. and i wanted to.
This is getting really really good and I hope... LOTS... that you kee writing this, coz it is AWESOME!
I love the characters and the plot is amazing so far, but i wanna see more of the two princes... and i dislike Vaughn... he has a funny name... but i like it... but i dont like the charcter if ya know what I mean...
Um... I really wanna know what happens next, coz ya left me more confused this time then I was before... maybee coz I skim read sumtimes...(only coz I've read it like 5 times before anyways... I swear...)
Anyways please update soon, I really wana know whats gonna happen...
| runaway sheet chapter 19 . 2/7/2010
Forget kill, I'm making it slow and painful. Dam* you, fool! Why'd you do such a thing? I know it isn't meant to be all dandy and whatnot, but so many complications? I'l take your head apart.. on behalf of Daniil, of course. Now Marek is going to be wooed-yeesh.
Better be giving us an update soon. Also, sorry I din't read this update earlier. I tend to forget what happens in stories and feel lazy if I have to re-read stuff to remember what was going on. I had to read 3 previous chapters, but I was all up for it. NOw, you better be up for more writing, young author-typething, We want more updates!
Keep your hands off, VAughn, I don't trust you *readies baseball bat* Haha, I betcha they don't have baseball in their time- he won't know what hit him.. teeheehee
| xXx.Fallen.Angel.xXx chapter 19 . 1/23/2010
I really hope tyhat you're gonna finish this story because it is AMAZING!
I love the chaaracters, especially Daniil and Juliana(she is hilarious). Are the countries in this France et England though? or Ireland? Im pretty sure that Marek's country/monarchy... thing, is France... but ey' i'm not positive.
Anywyas... The plot line for this is awesome... though this chapter was a lil short... oh wel, maybee i just read too much... meh, i love where the stories going so far... and i really hope that Daniil and Marek get together, i guess considering the nature of it, they probably will, but its nice to hope ya know.
Please please update soon, i can see how long it's taken to get to this point, and i hope ya don't give up on it, that would be depressing...
Anyhow... hope ya update...sounds a bit redundant now, but i hope you do anyways...
| Mana chapter 19 . 1/14/2010
I would like to say~ I througally enjoyed yourstory, I finished it a few days ago, and I'm just now getting around to reviewing, cause I forgot..
| runaway sheet chapter 18 . 7/20/2009
Why’s he so bit** * to Artek? The meanie. Someone woke up on the wrong side of thebed.
Why is Daniil leaving just when Marek needs him? What’s going on? Give us answers now! Though I’m secretly glad it didn’t end with them making out and.. . ..
Daniil: Good morning MAREK.
Marek: *giggle* Good Morning, Daniil.
Daniil: So, uh.. um.
Daniil: You were, um, great last night.
Marek: Uh huh.
Daniil: And so, I have decided that since you bed so well, you shall be my lover and I will protect you as one would a wife-
Marek: Hey, just coz I bottomed doesn’t –
Daniil: And we shall live happily ever after.\
Marek: Oh, OK then.
Or something like that. What I’m getting at is that their personalities and situations haven’t been changed completely after the smut. *thumbs up*
Umm, is MArek.. angsting? Heh, it’s a healty dose of reality, so it’s fine. The end kinda sounded like he was going to off himself or actually that setting of the harsh waves at dawn kinda suggest that someone’s going to shove him in. Eek. Update, coz I can’t take IT ANYMORE!
| meep chapter 18 . 7/13/2009
Two great new chapters. Much happenings :)
I did pick up on the odd typo and think you got the names mixed around once at the end of chapter 17 but I was too busy reading on to stop and mark where so not much help to you.
No hatred, you need a good storm to make for better rainbows ;)
| QueenCasey chapter 18 . 7/13/2009
Ah. I don't hate you after this at all. I think every story needs a bit of sadness in it. Though I am afraid of what will be said when the two do see each other again.
| HazeleyedHoney chapter 18 . 7/12/2009
If I had to guess, I'd say Daniil is going home so he can make arrangements to stay on a more permanent basis. But both Marek and Daniil are idiots and they'd do well to talk to people. Great chapter. Update soon.
| EllYouSeeWhy chapter 18 . 7/12/2009
I love that you just had that cute little prince in the lap moment then the hot sex and now it's all angsty :D what more could a girl want lmao. I hope you ride out the angst because I am quite a junkie tbh :] Was very happy when i got update alerts for this really liked these two chapters :]:]x