Reviews for Sweet Little Lies
fariswheel chapter 24 . 7/31/2011
I love this! Toby's mushy and Jack's high and drunk and crazy and I love them all! Except Will the Dill. He sucks dirty old monkey balls.
wakeyourdreamz chapter 24 . 7/15/2011
This was a really great story! I enjoyed it heaps!

There were a fair amount of grammatical/spelling errors, just quick things; & some things I didn't really get but other than that it was awesome!

Jack was really dense x_x poor Toby, but at least they ended up together in the end. So cute!
i-wish-i-had-wings chapter 24 . 7/6/2011
lol, this was really funny! had me in stiches xD i must say i like reading "crazy" stories like this (have you read "hiring a hooligan"?)they just make the world a brighter place xp thank you very much for a good laugh, i'll definetly check out your other stories too )
MuffinsRoxSox chapter 24 . 5/28/2011
That was so adorable! Jack is so cute! Even if she can be horribly dense sometimes. And food is delicious, so I don't blame her. Well, imma go now. :)
impossibly-infinite chapter 24 . 2/26/2011
Nice story! Thumbs up!
Aneira Crimson chapter 24 . 1/24/2011
CRAZY JACK!
Aneira Crimson chapter 3 . 1/24/2011
Hahahaha! Her ruler is her security blanket!
XxXKBXxX chapter 24 . 12/17/2010
I love your story. I think that Jack is really crazy but that's why I like her. _
wishful.thinking.x chapter 24 . 10/20/2010
great story! funny, entertaining and all round pretty well written :D hope you get that epilogue out... some day? "
lilthingash chapter 24 . 9/24/2010
AWWA! I think this story is the best I've read on this website. It has everything a great story has!
chapsticklips chapter 24 . 9/4/2010
Hilarious story! Jack and Toby have great chemistry so I loved reading about nthem. Great plot, freaking hilarious characters. Top job!
windyday chapter 6 . 8/11/2010
Original plot, and pretty interesting characters. And Jack totally reminds me of Jane from Hiring a Hooligan by Deena. I'm not implying anything, but it's hard for me to read this when comparisons keep popping up. Obviously your story is very popular, and I congratulate you on that. I don't think I'm going to keep on reading.. but.. go Jack and Toby! :). Keep writing!
Jimmi J chapter 24 . 7/11/2010
I freaking love this story.

It was awesome.

I love Jack's character. It reminds me if myself.

Except for the whole being obssessed with Science...

:) Great story
frozen-creature chapter 1 . 6/26/2010
Hehehe. I like this! "I'm stronger than Optimus Prime, more Jedi than Luke, totally cooler than Jack Sparrow." Now that had me going. I know you wrote this a while back, but I can't help but still feel the need to drop a review just to say that I love the realistic and comical feel that this story has so far. :)
MoManiac chapter 24 . 6/16/2010
AH i loved it! stories with quirky female leads are my ABSOLUTE faves! i LOVE them. i am SO favoriting this! and you! hurraah! and the tension was like SO thick it was insane, and she was so oblivious... ek so cute, cute enough to reduce me to a babbling idiot! i seriously laughed through this entire thing... loved it... yeah
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