Reviews for Sweet Little Lies
lxlanimefreaklxl chapter 3 . 8/17/2007
haha, fishtarian? you know, you actually had me looking that up at and i thought i added a new word to my vocabulary. lmao. this story is amazing! thanks for the update!
Chloe chapter 3 . 8/17/2007
heya ur stpry is so gud but how is she gonna seduce the gal? and y did toby give her a weird look when she was saying how her ex dumped her for victoria? omg so hooked on this story! cant wait for ur next update! lookin forward to it!

xoxoxoxox
D.E. David chapter 3 . 8/17/2007
Aw I loved this chapter

It was hilarious

I find your writing very different in this story

Both writing's are equally good

anyways i can't wait for the next chapter

this was extremely funny :]
hawthorncharade chapter 3 . 8/16/2007
I think this is a very humorous fic. It's really original too!
Piratesfanatic chapter 3 . 8/16/2007
I really enjoy your story. :) I started reading it just today and I think you're a really good writer. I'm not sure what you should fix, it sounds good to me. :) Please update soon.

Oh, I guess you could review my story "Midnight Snack" if you want. :)
bloopeebloop chapter 2 . 8/6/2007
You know...you actually got me pretty confused with Jack's gender..

Not that I have anything against slash fiction..

in fact I love slash fiction...

really..

Right. Anyway...

this story kicks major ass...it's random, silly and humorous..

me likey!
lxlanimefreaklxl chapter 2 . 8/5/2007
THIS. IS. AWESOME! omg, haha, i couldnt help but crack up. just gotta love this story!
D.E. David chapter 2 . 8/5/2007
Haha this is pretty hillarious i really enjoyed this chapter

your writing is great

I really like toby

i can't wait to see where this goes great job :]

Please update soon
Sharap'n chapter 2 . 8/5/2007
Nice. I apologise for not leaving a more substantial review.
concerto49 chapter 1 . 8/4/2007
The introduction felt a little boring. Nice use of the formatting to bring it out, but felt it went on a little much.

Some of it was rather funny.

Some nice twist of events.

Anyhow. Cheers.
Muphys Hate Mail chapter 1 . 8/4/2007
wow this should be a interesting and funny story
sealednectar chapter 1 . 8/4/2007
This is great and seriously funny, I can't wait for the next update. Update soon!:)
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