|Reviews for under webclocked hands|
| Mary Phoenix chapter 1 . 8/4/2007
That was very good. I loved the jacket imagery; I have a few of those. The Teardrops and butterfly backdrops was great too. How At all is one line. I also love the image of you and your love standing on dead grass, your love with a gun in his/her hands. Great stuff.
| concerto49 chapter 1 . 8/4/2007
Wow, rather shocking - buring your head in the ink.
And the jacket bit too.
Some very vivd images used.
I felt that towards the middle or somewhere there you dropped out on the imagery. Should have kept that going. It came back a little at the end which was good.
Anyhow. It was cool. Cheerios.