|Reviews for becoming exposed|
| merrymowmow chapter 1 . 11/2/2007
I was wondering when you're going to update?
| concerto49 chapter 1 . 8/4/2007
Yeah well realized we always have plenty of new ideas and have the urge to start new stories. It's okay.
Who's not all over the place. I just cut some of them if I couldn't go on. Hope this continues though.
Bold the chapter title.
Could have been more description between the dialogues to even things out.
| Orangeena chapter 1 . 8/4/2007
Very nice... Cody's a bit weird (to willingly go to a Christian camp... and they don't even seem super religious!), but quite likable. Hopefully he'll be able to confide in his brother about his sexuality one day. I think he'd understand, yeah?
But it seems that Cody actually wants to 'turn' straight or something. How unfortunate... I'm guessing there's much more to the backstory that we don't know about them, because his mom wasn't upset about Michael (who, I think is better identified as pansexual rather than bisexual.. maybe he's unfamiliar with the term?), but Cody is still unwilling to come out. Fear? Uncertainty?
He's probably just confused. Yeah, that happens to the best of us.
Cheers and good luck.. it's a great start.