Reviews for Cage Bird In Demon Arms |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Hope you update soon! I'm dying to figure out what the woman did! |
![]() ![]() ![]() thank god you were writing cause i like how this story is going thanks for writing |
![]() ![]() ![]() Gah! I want more xD Update soon D Pleaase! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved this story. Reading each chapter at the end making me want to read the next chapter. I can't wait to read the next chapter, chapter 21. Keep up the good writing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yay, this is interesting, please write many more chapters soon :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh who's that? great chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() love the story can the story is brilliant i can't wait for the next chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() i love it i can't wait for the next chapter so is the person in the wolf form someone she knows from here path or is it rath? |
![]() ![]() Your English is horrible in this story. I'm from the Caribbean Islands and I can write better than you. Well, I can write in English better than a 5 year old, which therefore means that I can write it better than you. Try revising a little. If you expect people to read and give it good reviews, at least make your work presentable. If you can't do that, then at least try to make it readable. |
![]() ![]() I liked it! Update soon :)) |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow this is really amazing so far! Hope for more! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() D: I demand to see more Rath/Kara moments! Anyways...: Lovin' your story! Please update soon ; v ; |
![]() ![]() ![]() wonderfull story! D actually was supposed to be in bed a couple hours ago an first read the reworked chapters of this story, then wondered why u were redoing them so i read the original. i love the original, yea the first few chpaters were laid out a bit acquired but it progressed very nicely. i am kinda / cause i cant read more untill u post more xD so plz plz hurry an post? i give ur story a 5 of 5 D |
![]() ![]() ![]() hmm i am getting to get suspicouis of him |