Reviews for On and Off
xoxopresley chapter 1 . 3/4/2008
I dedicate this song to my ex. Great job!
Beautiful Bones chapter 1 . 8/6/2007
I like it. It rhymes very well. However, I feel that the course should ends. It like ends on a note, if you know what I mean. I think you could add a couple more lines, and it'll be really good.

I give it a 3 of 5.

Happy Writings!
Arafax chapter 1 . 8/5/2007
Hmm...decent enough I suppose, though some of the lines sounded slightly forced in my opinion. But overall you did a nice job with this.

Arafax