Reviews for Sinnerman
Deliah Minicet chapter 1 . 8/7/2007
I really like the structure in this poem, especially the use of capitalization as a tool. Am I thinking correctly that they represent a shift in power, perhaps? First the slaves actions are lowercase and the slave owners uppercase, and then it begins to meld and switch over? Very nice :)
Sunshine Lust chapter 1 . 8/4/2007
it's like AP US History with set to a erotic macabre beat, and hiding a community service message.

(this is a good thing; i've been moved to near-speechlessness. fuck eloquency. because this is far more beautiful and fascinating than i could ever hope to be.)